Please write an essay " report of what i have wriiten before for 1.5 – 2 pages.

I already wrote 2 pages, I need someone to reread and rewrite the sentence in a good way and correct the grammar mistakes and choose an academic words. then I need to write from 1.5 to 2 pages of what I have written in the beginning about the situation and everything I have done.
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