this is 2nd draft and i want you to finilize my essay. through following rules.
An introduction in which you give the necessary background information involved with the topic.Include the title and author of the article.A thesis that analyzes Kristof’s use of rhetorical appeals to build his argument.
Body Paragraphs that provide transition and a topic sentence and:Development of the main point of the paragraph.Strong evidence from the text–paraphrases, summary and quotations that support the point.Quotes uses correctly and presented using the “quote sandwich” model in which you introduce and provide context for the quote, provide the quote, explain and analyze the quote.
Your conclusion is your opportunity to wrap up your essay and recapitulate what you established in your thesis to prove to the reader you have accomplished what you set out to do in the essay. In your conclusion you should:Restate your thesis in different wordsBriefly summarize the main points discussed in the body of your paper.End with a strong statement that ties the whole point of the paper together.
3rd drafts should be between 3-4 pages.